X-story - My Neighbor Uncle Li

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Reminded me of the time when I was also fxxked by a young man and he called me his old bitch. It may sound harsh now and cruel but during sex, anything goes. I was actually being fxxked doggy style and used by him like a bitch. Got butt slapped and butt slammed too. Once the fxxking got going, I go nuts with sex and let him do whatever he wants to me and treat me rough. It's feels so natural to let go of that controlled feeling of shame and just enjoy being fxxked good. I'm sure many have done that too but are too shy to admit it.

My neighbor Uncle Li

My family's house is four building store heights houses, but also some

small courtyard. In the entire strip alley house is basic all is the

same form, lives in the next door is a divorce uncle, the father and

mother tube is called him for Arab League Li, but I call him for Uncle

Li. Uncle Li this year is 43 years old, the belt eyeglasses, about 85

kilograms body weights, highly about 175. When he smiles the time

facial cast has two small dimples, is mature does not lose lovably.

His whole body all is the dense and numerous body wool.

Summer time,

Uncle Li daytime in home's time likes putting on sand beach trousers,

a vest. Penetrates that vest, I can clear see on his that vigorous and

healthy chest dark body Mao Honei two grain of 煙頭 sizes nipple and

that two red enough to become dark 乳暈. The chest wool continuously

downward grows the spread, crosses his that middle age already the

belly which puts on weight until the shameful secret spot.

Evening

when nobody he likes putting on that kind of young briefs, I detected

he most likes is puts on red, Uncle Li's bathroom is in his small

courtyard, therefore takes a bath or gets up the restroom all to have

to arrive in the small courtyard. My room is in two Lou K'aocho he the

family, he takes a bath in the summer late at night on most likes the

body on clothes escaping smoothly, then careless trend bathroom. He

that very large egg flower ( cock ) takes a walk along with him but about

swings, or lies down in his courtyard enjoys the cool air on the

rocking chainr, Uncle Li frequently only puts on underpants. Small

briefs package of his that is looking like the very large egg flower,

actually wraps up that growth in the thigh inside pubic hair, a Man

Man large package often lets me look forgets oneself. Saw his that

partly approaches the entire bare body, I all can control the

masturbation, in the mind fantasized and Uncle Li makes love scene.

This regarding me said exceeds that exquisite scenery!

Uncle Li is a unit's administration. Also did not know is his wife is

not right to or his wife, but from me to Uncle Li's understanding and

the understanding, should be his wife to is not. Does not have the

divorce time is basic all needs to quarrel daily with his wife. After

passes through time quarrels, his wife took the baggage belt his son

to leave he, in afterwards heard divorced.

Uncle Li he usually likes

my family fleeing the gate to ask my father to chat drinks. His son is

carried off after all by his wife, therefore he likes teasing me very

much to play, when in my father and mother the home also is the

attendance has Canada to me. Because all is the neighbor between,

everybody also no scruples, is together sentiment of not the bad

relative. Communicates for this two between closely, I also frequently

arrive his home to play even eat meal in his family.

In the this year this summer some evening, because of weather

sultriness, in before dawn past three, tosses about does not rest I on

the bed to set out to stand in the window looks at outside the window

in that nighttime sky star luminous spot spot. Turns the head to look

to Uncle Li's courtyard, under that bright moonlight, I saw Uncle Li

the light body to lie down on his that rocking chainr, he that red

briefs lost on the place. A hand is pinching he to be covered with on

the body wool chest the nipple, another hand grasps he that thick egg

flower, does not stop makes the piston motion. Vaguely can hear to his

groan sound and that gasps for breath the sound which produces because

of the pleasant sensation. Saw such scene, I also bore takes off my

underpants masturbation.

Crossed good a while, only hears to Uncle Li to gasp for breath the

sound to be more and more heavy. The double leg makes an effort very

straight which extends, I knew he wanted cum. Is really as

expected, only sees a cream color under the silver moonlight the

seminal fluid as soon as to spurt, falls is covered with on the dark

wool belly in his that. Uncle Li has squeezed out final drop of

seminal fluid with the hand, then blows with the finger belly on

seminal fluid delivers toward in his mouth, after blows does clean, he

has stood.

The body is slightly curving to front, the hand traces

toward the anus place. I only then discovered originally on his anus

also inserts a thing, waits for him the time which draws out that

thing, I only then looked clear originally is a three fingers sizes

cucumber. In Uncle Li's hand takes that cucumber, on the face the belt

satisfied expression is moving towards his washroom. I also bore again

also cum. I thought Uncle Li he also likes playing like this.

Looked like I am should cancel this only center prime of life bear, if

can collude with likes Uncle Li such strong bear, little lives several

years I all to want. But did not know whether realizes my desire,

hoped the heaven can understand my wish, gives me to realize, that

that would be nice!

I or liked same in the past, had spatially arrives Uncle Li the family

to drop around. Uncle Li also has spatially arrives my home to come,

moreover also some times can keep my family to eat meal. Saw regarding

that day evening me the matter I shut the mouth does not raise, in the

heart only is silently anticipation I and Uncle Li can make love

together or pass the night together.

The opportunity has finally come,

the father and mother they because the grandmother body is not good

must arrive the maternal family to stay a while several days, but I

must stay behind look after the house. Thereupon father and mother on

hold me for next door Uncle Li, lets him help to consider I that

several day-long lives. Uncle Li also very much was glad to accept,

everybody was after all the neighbor is living together also has

several years. Mutually help again normal only matter. Father and

mother leave first day, Uncle Li because is unit's leadership,

therefore he may do when no matter may shift to an earlier time gets

off work goes home.

But I actually had to wait till almost 6. to be

able to get off work, wait for mine to get the home time Uncle Li

already busy good table of meals to wait for me. After I put the

motorbike first to arrive next door Uncle Li the family to hit free food to him.

Greeting. "Uncle, I came back, needs to help? "

" Yo,

the young fellow came back. Does not use, already could eat meal, you

first took a bath. I fried this green vegetables have been allowed."

When I open his courtyard door, Uncle Li is cutting the vegetable.

"That is good, I first went home take a bath" I to look at also truly

nothing to be allowed I to help, thereupon the decision went home

first takes a bath, could not stand in any case in here looks at Uncle

Li the stir-fried dish.

"Ha, how uncle you does do such many vegetables/Our individual may

finish eating." "Has not related, again said your

young people also want to eat the spot, like this is also good to the

body." Uncle Li all carries the vegetable to the small courtyard in

eats. "Is good, could eat meal, the bright child you had to eat the

spot, did not have to be polite uncle, ha-ha..." Uncle Li reorganizes

while smiles. "Which meeting, do you feel

relieved, I always all not uncle you when the bystander looked did not

know must trouble uncle you how many day, the polite speech is cannot

pass with own belly, I, only then cannot be that silly. Ha ha..."

"That has been right, oh to, I takes two bottles of beer" "or I to

come, I knew you put in there" I stood up communicate Uncle Li in the

family to walk.

On the dining table we chatted very many speeches, besides the work,

most topics is looks for girlfriend's matter about me. "Does my

showing, looks for wife this matter you to be possible to need to

settle on, have works that is other matter. Most importantly the

person must be virtuous, must be good to the parents, must be filial.

Now at last is important. Has been defeated like uncle in the

marriage, any matter was not in the end harms own "Uncle Li to say

carried the wine class, tossed down the cup in beer.

"Uncle you can

rest assured that that, now my age also small, is not anxious is

looking for the girlfriend, may slowly look. Comes, I respected uncle

a cup "I also to carry the wine class to respect to Uncle Li. Uncle

after Li drinks the liquor, stood up escapes the body on vest.

"The

weather too has been hot, my this person is sensitive to heat, you

looked, after the vest all is the sweat" Uncle Li takes off the vest

to say to me. "Certainly, uncle whole body wool. Not hot only then

blames, to like I such thin person is not the same class whole body

perspiration, much less is you "

" that you also takes off clothes,

everybody is a man, no problem! And so on can finish eating the food

to wash the bath is." Looked Uncle Li that stout and strong stature, I

suddenly thought very much impulse. Also obligingly from takes off my

coat.

"Uncle, your body wool many oh. You looked I only have on the

leg only then to have, but you actually are the whole body all are, is

your body wool drops down from on all is connects in together?" I did

not know is drinks the reason, usually did not dare the speech which

said to him I actually all to say today. Originally thought he

listened certainly to be able to be angry, who knew he actually

laughed out loud. Smiles I feel helpless, also does not dare to speak

again.

Actually hears to him to say "my bodily sweat gland is

developed, therefore only then meets the whole body wool. The beard I

every day blow, is after all the image important, ha ha..." Uncle Li

very heroic smiles, Chungyang of the smiling face just had

the tender feelings. Dares to like daring to hate these four

characters to put on his body not for, takes lays down is the man true

colors. Remembered he has said to my father: Loves, I love gigantic,

but walks the situation which divorces to the present I not to regret,

because I am really beloved she. As for her did not understand

treasures me, seeks the harbor I also not to have the means in

addition. How many like this also has to the sentimental rigid man?

"Does the bright child, what do? How is worried?" "Oh, does not have!

I only am was thinking that, you such person very is really difficult

like uncle to look, can maintain to own image, the treatment sentiment

also is earnest, if I am female I can marry for you "I crack a joke

say to him. "Did your this kid, how take up uncle to crack a joke. Was

careful I hit your buttocks, looked you later also will dare like this

impolite. Ha ha..."

"Uncle, I saw. I like you!" I tranquil looked he

said to him. Uncle

Li hears to mine speech, suddenly between the wine class which takes

up returns the tabletop "you...What did you say? What do you see?" He

some surprised asks me! I

static look at him, stands up walks to him.

Gently has kissed "uncle

in his facial cast, I like you. You that day evening do the matter I

all saw "I such action and such speech he already knew I was saying

any, also knew I said" had known "was any meaning. He uses the

principle which handles gently to take care squats in front of him my

hair! "Uncle also is a man, also needs the nature. But is not such

which you thought "he also in the matter which does for oneself

quibbles.

But that day evening I obviously am see him to use a

cucumber to do own anus, I am am impossible to look wrong! I do not

want again to listen to his explanation, closely grasps him, seals up

his lip with mine lip. He evades my enthusiasm, evades my lip. I am

tenacious the lip which opens his that with the tongue diligently

spade to shut tightly. My pine operates a hand, pinches on his chest

nipple with it.

Slowly he furiously "Sino-Japanese War" transforms

docile and is warm. His lip no longer was cannot shut tightly start,

instead was the warm like fire, both hands also closely grasps me. In

his mouth liquor taste and the smoke taste let me sink confuses

suffocates, the throat border transmits the mean groan sound. I like

on his body positive being resolute, I like him falling cheek Hu.

After hot lips, both of us stop all movements, gains ground looked

opposite party looks at each other as soon as to smile.

"The bright

child, you first eats. Uncle first washes comes "him to say again

gently has kissed my, sets out to walk to the bathroom. My back just

to the bathroom, only is hearing to the shower sound.

Crossed a meeting, the water sound has finally vanished. Uncle Li

grasps me from mine behind, gently nips my ear with the mouth. Very in

a soft voice asked I

"I have come, has become impatient?" One side me

enjoys him to stroke at the same time gently nod, is the reply. Uncle

Li changes to my front, very careful looks at me, the picture is did

not know I resemble.

After looked at my a while, suddenly has hugged

me, enters his room. Makes an effort to throw me on his bed, I have

called. He actually does not pay attention to my calling, "the great

bear stands up from failure" presses me under his body. The lip

started from mine facial cast to kiss down, also slowly downward

migration. Lift up high mine both hands on mine head, toward tickles

in the nest along mine neck to lick, the hemp hemp crisp feeling by

tickles the nest to spread over my whole body. Carries over my chest

in addition, gently nips I that small nipple with the tooth. I also

bore again call to make noise, original and the man made 1. not to

compare the woman to be bad.

He carries over my lower part of the

body, both hands carelessly unties my outside trousers, makes an

effort to pull my underpants. My that already very hard penis has

shot, Uncle Li uses the mouth to contain it immediately, a while skids

with the tongue in my egg flower's coronal place, a while likes in

rinses mouth equally to contain mine egg flower in his mouth rinses.

The feeling lets me want the immortal to want to die, cannots bear him

to suffer. He downward licks in addition, back and forth licks toward

mine anus place, that kind of feeling specially also is comfortable.

He looked my crisp about turned the waist to use he that stubby middle

finger to moisten the saliva, then slowly inserted my that never to

open in a package of anus.

"...Is not good, the pain, does not want

very much, uncle does not want."

I use the hand to hold him to enter my anus that hand. "Did not fear

that, did not fear, uncle and so on also gives you, just started to

meet the pain, one has been able not to be able the pain" to say he

started to twitch his finger, saw my knitted brow started to stretch

start, he increased dynamics the spasm, moreover time was deeper than,

ratio even more vigorously. To afterwards inserted while revolves his

finger, my anus slowly turned by the pain is sore, again turned itch, I

started to groan.

Cannot help but coordinates his finger movement to

sway from side to side my waist. Uncle Li saw I am more and more

excited, uses two fingers to insert. Must know his finger is

originally thick, how two fingers didn't that need to say. I also

thought I that small anus competes can hold his that two fingers.

Li Uncle's entire Xiong?k'ua above mine body, his finger still inserts

the spasm which back and forth does not stop in mine anus, but the

mouth actually holds my egg flower ( cock ).

This I am the near distance look

at his egg flower: The diameter probably has four centimeters sizes,

the length has about 20 centimeters specially is that big glans,

changes because of the hyperemia approaches the purple, two greatly

round testicles heavily hang under his egg flower. Really does not

leave me to expect, his body wool is the whole body connects in

together, continuously spreads from the chest to the calf on,

including anus periphery also all is the thick belt curl wool. I hold

his egg flower (cock), I studied him to let my comfortable style do him a

moment ago.

I also study him to use the middle finger to insert his

that to be covered with the pubic hair in the anus to twitch, holds my

egg flower from his that the mouth to transmit the unclear groan

sound. I try to insert his anus with two fingers, takes the trouble to

insert the feeling very much closely. The slowly start became less

crowded, I use the spasm which two fingers back and forth does not

stop, traces in his anus the rectum. Gurgles, warms up, also sends out

under mine spasm □□the sound. Under I such attack, I may feel his

egg flower is more and more hard.

Suddenly, Uncle Li's finger is separated from my anus, in the anus

suddenly thought very void, Uncle Li crawls gets out of bed. "Dear,

you and so on, I let you be crisper" said kissed me to move towards

the kitchen.

Comes back in time many cucumber what group cotton tape,

only saw that cucumber diameter size like his egg flower the diameter

size, another not that thick, but has been also already considerable,

but the length has three, about 40 centimeters. The melon body covers

entirely the uneven lump.

He arrives the head of a bed, turns oil from

the headstock, does not need to say certainly is the lubricating oil

comes. "Comes, Ming Tzu. Does not need to fear that, kneels." Uncle Li

hugs me to say, hints the posture which I should do. I kneeling which

said to him on bed, he used in the hand the lubricating oil to spread

has filled that cucumber and my anus. Forces in my anus with cucumber

small that gently inch,

"......Good is thick. Mmm......Good is thick.

Uncle, your light spot, good is comfortable...Deep 1.!" I call.

This but the egg flower size thing forces in my

anus. In the anus enriches the feeling comes back once more, Uncle Li

slowly spasm that cucumber, on cucumber body these uneven lumps are

not stopping the friction this my rectum wall, stimulates my prostate

gland, that kind of acid hemp's feeling lets me fly the heaven.

Floats

in airborne, in the mouth does not stop the groan, is gasping for

breath. Uncle Li climbs up the bed, also likes me equally to kneel on

the bed, we buttocks to buttocks. Uncle Li he uses the lubricating oil

to wipe in on he anus, a hand according to on the bed, strut his whole

body dynamics, another hand-held is inserting in my anus that

cucumber, slowly inserts his anus.

Our two people by yellow cucumber joined in

same place, any one only then as soon as moves the cucumber to be able

to move along with it. That kind of feeling very subtle, also is very

special!

"The bright child, you makes an effort to turn, good is

comfortable. The bright child I loves you, and so on as soon as meets

you to have to use your egg flower( cock) to fxxk me, fxxks my this

inexpensive goods, maliciously fxxks dies I, I is your dog "

" not, you are the old bitch, I am the young bitch, you also must fxxk me. I also am you." We such lascivious call, Uncle Li takes off usually that

camouflage one side. In the mouth does not stop says the vulgar

language.

"Uncle, I now must hold ( fxxk) you, I must maliciously fxxk me. I

have not held excellently, I or place male. " I do not stop sway from

side to side my buttocks to call.

"The bright child comes, uncle holds to you. You may have maliciously

to hold uncle, uncle only then can be comfortable." Uncle Li to say

extracts the connection in our anus that cucumber, one kind

inexplicable is void transmits once more from mine anus.

"... Good uncomfortable, uncle, I am quite uncomfortable. Very void," I

said.

"Did not fear that, clever, did not fear, one could be all

right. Comes, ties up with the string uncle, uncle was yours to use," Uncle Li

said uses that string county which he that came in a moment ago to tie

up own hand.

Then instruction I was tying up him, I which taught him

have been bundling according to the method him. Bypasses his head the

string, again separates his double foot the bunch, his anus completely

reveals in me at present. Some yellow things along are flowing out

from his anus, I use the paper to dry him clean, also helps the thing

which oneself the anus leaves to dry clean.

Supports my egg flower ( penis) to

insert to Uncle Li's anus, already relaxed anus all of a sudden on

mine egg flower entire submergence.

"...Do not rape me, ask you not to have to rape me......Does not want....Ask you not to want," him arrogantly to shout.

Hears to he such speech,

I start to know he longed for is raped. No, is longed for the acting

the role which rapes. I made an effort to blow a his ear and the area

around it.

"The inexpensive goods, softly result in do not eat, that

father comes hardly"

"ask you not to want to hit me, ask you. I have

not dared, I later all do not dare "

" to be called the daddy," me

conveniently on his thigh a whack," pa ", a clear sound has made a

sound.

"...The daddy, I does not dare. Asks you gently to the son 1., good is

crisp. Enters 1. "

ha ha, this bitch now not is controlled by me in

mine egg flower? Go did the usual cruel type to where? Uncle Li sways

from side to side he that large buttocks with in, makes an effort

going against to mine egg flower. My buttocks slightly as soon as will

draw back in the future, my egg flower( cock ) slid from in Uncle Li's anus.

"...Do not come out, I am being comfortable. The daddy, do not have to

come out!" Uncle Li sways from side to side his that bearish body, wants

to belay my egg flower.

I conveniently take up that cucumber as soon

as to insert into toward his anus, went in. An my hand takes the

cucumber to revolve sways from side to side, another hand grabs he

thick long egg flower to make an effort stroking it. His egg flower is such

big, such thickness, grasps in the hand feel is such good.

"Good is

comfortable, withstood! Withstood my prostate gland...Good is comfortable..."

Ha, usually is he not very the manly ? How now show this feminine appearance?

I carry over mine buttocks Uncle Li the forehead, the anus just in on

Uncle Li's mouth, I thought Uncle Li he can transfer his head, who

knew he does not have, instead stretches out the tongue to come the

day I the anus.

"...Mmm......Good is comfortable, your this old bitch, quickly licks. ......Crisply died I, the old bitch quickly licked "

"mmm...Mmm..." Has sent out the response from Uncle Li's mouth.

"I also do not want you to fxxk me, I want you to fxxk me" I to act like a spoiled brat say.

"Good, good, Ming Tzukuai! Uncle fxxks you, you sits, lets uncle

serve you, also crisply let you be crisp "I to stand from the bed,

held Uncle Li that very hard egg flower slowly to sit,

"...Good is thick...Too big...Bright child, I quite comfortable, all already made

a moment ago yours anus already enough the pine ( loose), has not thought of or such tight, your anus was also more important than mine ex-wife's vagina, I too loved you......"

Uncle Li on the one hand sways from side to side on the other hand

his body not to stop gasps for breath said. I also thought the taste

which holds (fxxking) originally is such is crisp, such comfortable, also in

"goes against" a moment ago has wondered, now I which in the mouth

said to Uncle Li finally knew was how a matter, originally was goes

against prostate gland that kind of feeling is really makes one

dismiss from mind with difficulty, imagine with difficulty!

My egg

flower (cock) because the prostate gland received stimulates but the hard

like cucumber, always had plants very wants to look for the meat hole

to rub its desire.

"The father does not have crisp(fxxking good feeling) enough you to want to

be comfortable? Looked how the father does put in order you "

I to make an effort to draw out that root to insert in Uncle Li in the anus that

cucumber, Uncle Li's anus draws out along with that cucumber

contracts.

"Does not want, to ask you to let me be crisp(fxxking good feeling), lets me

crisply die, my anything listens to you" Uncle Li to yell.

I crawl

Uncle Li's body, has gotten down the bed. Stands pulls under the bed

Uncle Li's body to the bed nearby. Both hands hold his double foot,

the body proceed as soon as to deliver.

My egg flower all enters his

anus all of a sudden, this I do not stop the spasm which, is continual

does not stop and sway from side to side my waist. A wave meets a

wave, Uncle Li yells on the bed, to beg for mercy! My hand has wiped

some lubricating oil, grips Uncle Li's egg flower not to stop stroking,

the original scarlet red glans appeared red.

"Is not good, I had to

leave ( cum)...I had to leave(cum), my little daddy, you quickly made an effort to hold (fxxk) me! ...Mmm......"

I do not stop call, in this time, I again also controlled I.

Therefore stores up in my in vivo seminal fluid as soon as supports, I

make an effort to go against to front, but Uncle Li's both hands

closely hold on the bed the bed sheet, swaying from side to side which

the buttocks does not stop, the response my egg flower.

We

simultaneously are projecting( ejeculate) on this moment for the opposite party

first drop of seminal fluid. The pleasant sensation arrival, we go all

out gasping for breath. My hand tight grips Uncle Li's egg flower not

to put, now at last discovered his seminal fluid shoots my full chest,

the pulpous state seminal fluid hangs in mine chest is not willing

toward the lower reaches.

We such slowly tranquilly get down, face one

another lightly as soon as smile. I on the body string untie Uncle Li,

Uncle Li already was impatient remains with the mouth me on my chest

the seminal fluid to lick dryly does clean. I and Uncle Li relative

kneeling on bed, closely supports in the same place. Two mouths

already closely stick on the same place have not put.

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I gave my first time like this to the beloved man, therefore I felt very happy,

satisfies very much......(To be continued)

[FattChoy]

Any arousal effects of this story is totally negated by the use of terrible English.

In fact I'm left with a feeling of constipation.

It's like watching a really bad Japanese p--n movie that doesn't do anything for you but stirs up some disgust, not to mention waste your time.

Am I alone here?

I know I may be showing some attitude here, but the feeling of total turn off is real.

What's all the talk about quality posting if language isn't part of it???

[Guest Rah]

Fattchoy i totally agreed with you.... i really cant figure out what he trying to tell us ? Hai.. this story can be very nice to read. but becoz of his english.

[Guest Guest]

Hey dude, not everybody is fluent in english in this world. Do you shun people who don't speak proper english because you cannot easily comprehend much of what he said?

Looking at the translation, I would guess that he used a translation software. Those translations can sometimes be puzzling because of the mechanical way they apply the dictionary without trying to understand the whole context.

He could have just pasted the whole story in chinese text. Maybe he was trying to be helpful and do more. At least it is helpful for me who is curious about chinese and could not understand much chinese. The question is - before you criticize others, did you try to do more and contribute? I rather look at the effort than fault the results.

[FattChoy]

No one is shunning anyone here and it's not language chauvinism at play here.

But it's obvious, even to the blind, that this is substandard work. My teacher used to say, writing is not so much about using beautiful words, it's about communicating your ideas and thoughts. Numero Uno on the list of objectives is to make sure the other party gets it.

Do you? Do you think this article would pass Primary 5 English?

Obviously this is the work of a translation bot. I don't think normal people have to use the word 'vivo seminal fluid' in daily life. To me, it's not a decent effort. Basically the poster just dump us a sack of jigsaws here and ask us to piece it together.

Put it thisway, if I'm the poster, I'd do some editing to make sure my beloved audience enjoys it.

But you'll never know, there just might be some desperate enough to lick that shit off the toilet floor and say it's yummy.

Next time, post it in Chinese. Getting a portion of the crowd to understand it is better than all of us not getting it at all.

[Guest Guest]

"But you'll never know, there just might be some desperate enough to lick that shit off the toilet floor and say it's yummy."

Quit your whining remarks.

"Put it this way, if I'm the poster, I'd do some editing to make sure my beloved audience enjoys it. "

Everything is there for you to do something about it instead of whining. I've seen oralb done translation services before instead of whining.

Do the editing then. We'll appreciate you for that better than your whiny remarks.

[FattChoy]

I don't read Mandarin, but by all means, go ahead and post it in Chinese.

If the English is a bit rough, I'd gladly help if approached.

For this particular case, the writing was very turbulent that I do not get it at all.

For instance, the paragraph below is totally in outer space:

"Does not want, to ask you to let me be crisp(fxxking good feeling), lets me

crisply die, my anything listens to you" Uncle Li to yell.

I crawl

Uncle Li's body, has gotten down the bed. Stands pulls under the bed

Uncle Li's body to the bed nearby. Both hands hold his double foot,

the body proceed as soon as to deliver. "

The first part sounds like a scene from a boat being attacked by a Tsunami.

The latter part sounds like Uncle Li is having a baby.

Can anyone actually understand what was being portrayed?

Please humbly decipher the two paragraphs.

I don't think anyone can......

[oralb]

hi everyone

take it easy...

yes i couldnt understand what is being written here, but guess i should give him an effort to try.

there are definitely bigger things in life to get work up on (eg bigger penis )

anyway, here's the original article in Chinese, i got from the site that Guest mentioned...

it is no easy task to translate this story

enjoy

我家的房子是一棟四層高的房子，還有一個小院子。整條小

[Guest ApaIni]

Just a humble suggestion.

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Electro-Weekend

By Jackinnm@yahoo.com

NOTE: The characters in this story are real, with only

the names changed to protect the guilty. However, some

of the sex play is fictionalized, and did not happen

exactly that way. On a printed page, characters can

have oral sex and exchange bodily fluids with no

consequences. In real life unsafe sex can lead to

problems, such as hepatitis, herpes, and HIV. Be safe!

Tim's prick was hard and jerking inside the condom

that held the cup shaped electrode over the front of

his engorged and straining helmet. The electronic

pulses were sending sensations of delight into his

prick, driving him to ecstasy, as he eased the power

knob higher.

We'd decided to meet for another weekend of mutual

exploration and especially electro-sex, this time at

an out of the way motel in Colorado, both of us

arriving late Friday afternoon. Once inside the room,

we'd immediately stripped, our desire overcoming any

restraint we might have had. Tim's heavy-ended prick,

with its bulky helmet, swung invitingly in front of

his loose scrotum which was about to tighten with

excitement.

"You haven't changed at all," I said. "Your prick's

as ready to go as ever."

"Yours is pretty nice too," he replied as he rolled

the nipple of my long, overhanging foreskin between

two fingers, generating a gentle wet friction against

my glans. Our pricks were rapidly stiffening with

excitement, and as I pulled him to me they were

pressed between our bodies.

"I want to hug you for a few seconds," I said as I

squeezed him to me. I felt his strong arms enfold me

as he kissed my neck. We separated and stood inches

apart, our pricks pointing toward each other.

"You must be really hot," I observed. "Your prick's

already leaking dew from its eye." The lips of his

long slit were slightly parted and wet with his clear

slippery fluid, and I touched them with my finger. As

I began spreading the viscous natural lubricant around

his slit he began to moan lightly and clasped the end

of my foreskin, stretching it out away from my body to

put tension on its nerve endings.

"That feels so good, the way you're doing that," he

whispered. I knew that he enjoyed the light caresses

around the front dome of his engorged helmet.

"You know just what to do with my foreskin to make my

prick feel good," I answered. He'd begun twisting my

foreskin slightly, adding to my sensations.

"I wish I had a foreskin," he said wistfully.

"You can play with mine all you want, Tim. It's all

yours."

"We were both cut, but you had plastic surgery to get

your hood back," he said.

"You could get yours back by stretching." We were

both hot, partly because of the topic of our pricks,

and partly because of the tactile contact.

"I think we both need to come," Jack. It's been four

days since I came. I've been really busy at work. How

about you?"

"I haven't come in five days, and you're right. We

really need to relieve the tension." My tension was

high, as evidenced by my straining erection, the

outline of my bloated glans showing clearly through

the covering skin.

"Come on over here and I'll relieve you," he said,

leading me into the bathroom until we stood before the

sink. "This isn't romantic, but I'll make you come

fast, and then you can do me." I knew that Tim wanted

the psychological stimulation of playing with my

foreskin to build his excitement before I began

bringing him to orgasm.

"Oh, go ahead, Tim, I really need this," I said as

Tim's firm fingers began stripping back my foreskin,

exposing the rounded front dome of my helmet.

"You know how I like skinning you back," he said. "I

love to play with your foreskin but I really enjoy

pulling that skin back so I can see your beautiful

helmet." As his fingers worked on my prick, I was

holding his shaft firmly, studying the drops of liquid

that kept seeping from his slit. Now I ran my thumb

over the front of his glans, swiping sideways across

the lids of his prick-eye, spreading the slippery

liquid across his dome.

"I like the way your cock-lips pout when you're hard.

That hole looks like a teardrop," he said. "It's

purple-pink around the hole, but gets darker purple

farther back." My prick was responding to his

stimulation, and I felt my cock-root twitching deep

inside me.

"You're really reaching me, Tim. That feels so good

when you skin it back slowly." Tim suddenly stopped

and spoke:

"Let's get into the bedroom. Your cream's too good to

waste shooting it down the sink." He led me through

the door and pushed me gently flat on my back before

climbing onto the bed next to me. Tim continued:

"Remember when I slipped my finger inside your skin

and worked it around the head? Remember how good that

felt? Well, I want to do the same thing now, but with

my tongue." He crouched over me and clasped my prick

again, holding it upright with the foreskin pulled up

into a thick pucker. When he bent his head I felt the

tip of his tongue insinuating itself into the end of

my hood, pushing deeper and probing for my pee-hole.

"Wow, that feels good!" I said as I grasped his prick

again, jiggling the shaft-skin up and down to bump his

flaring corona. Tim lifted his head and said:

"I just love this, sticking my tongue into your skin.

I thought about this on the way over."

"I wish you had a foreskin too, so I could do it to

you, Tim." His prick had a thick brown Gomco scar half

and inch behind the head. However, the shaft-skin

seemed looser than I remembered. I turned my head

slightly and licked the leaking eye of his glans,

relishing the salty flavor of his lubricating fluid as

I inhaled the musky odor of his ball-sweat. Now I felt

Tim's tongue probing deeper into my foreskin, circling

the hole, and sliding farther to caress the broad

upper surface of my helmet and making my foreskin

bulge with its thickness. His lips closed around my

hood, pushing it back to bare my glans, and I felt the

tingling contact of my helmet with his tongue and

palate.

Tim's fist tightened on my shaft and began a rhythmic

pumping motion, bringing my foreskin up over the head

as he withdrew his lips, and then drawing my foreskin

down fully as his lips advanced to engulf my swollen

glans. We were both caught up in the passion of the

moment, sucking on each other's engorged tips and

tugging at each other's scrotums. Now Tim stopped for

a moment:

"Better stop sucking me, Jack. You're gonna come

soon, and I wouldn't want you biting me when you

shoot." I released his hot purple glans but maintained

the stroking motion with my fist, compressing his rim

on each up-stroke as he continued to tongue my helmet.

"I can feel it tickling," I moaned. Tim's lips and

tongue continued to oscillate up and down my helmet,

and I felt the sensations building up. A tickling

feeling encircled my rim, and then spread all over the

glans as he continued to fuel my fire. Tim's glans was

shiny and dark purple, inches in front of my eyes, as

I continued to stroke his magnificently formed prick.

Tim sucked and stroked my prick relentlessly, and now

I felt a tightening deep inside me, a sign that my

orgasm was about to boil out of my body. The tickle in

the head changed suddenly to a hot tingle, and I knew

I was rolling over the brink. A sharp convulsion deep

inside me sent the first thick stream of fluid searing

its way up my prick like a torrent of hot lava, and I

cried out helplessly at the acute sensations that

pervaded my body and blanked out my mind. As my eyes

closed the hot cream shot from my teardrop shaped

hole, flooding Tim's mouth, and I felt his lips

tighten behind my rim as my prick throbbed again,

delivering its second charge of semen.

Tim's other hand tugged on my scrotum, stretching the

thick skin and its nerve endings, as another hot spasm

wracked my body. I felt the thick cream boiling up my

urethra, slamming through the lips of my slit, as I

cried out again, sobbing and moaning in pure passion.

I was no longer stroking his prick, because I'd lost

all sense of direction, my mind numbed by the

overpowering sensations he was pouring into my body.

Another heavy spasm coursed through my groin, sending

another load of juice into Tim's waiting mouth. Tim

had stopped stroking my foreskin and his lips remained

locked behind my rim as my orgasm worked its way out.

The throbs were softer now, and the fluid just crept

up my tube, seeping from my slit.

My body relaxed as Tim released my prick, which was

too sensitive to touch. I took a few deep breaths and

opened my eyes to see Tim's face over mine as he

leaned down to plant a dry kiss on my lips.

"You really creamed, Jack, and almost drowned me. I

really loved feeling your hot cock throb in my mouth.

Your cream on my tongue tasted so good." I responded

by raising myself and pushing him flat on his back,

grasping his hot hard prick and engulfing his glans

with my lips. I locked my lips in the groove behind

his prominent corona and tickled his slit with my

tongue-tip as I pumped his shaft-skin. I smelled his

heavy sweat as I tugged on his scrotum and began

moving my lips up and down his bulky helmet,

lubricated by my saliva and his fluid.

As I worked his prick with my lips, tongue, and

palate, I felt the helmet swell and harden, losing its

sponginess as his excitement rose rapidly. Tim began

moaning helplessly, his excitement fueled both by

having had oral sex with my foreskinned prick and by

the sensations I was so avidly pouring into his erotic

organ. Now I quickly swiped my tongue-tip across the

gaping lips of his long slit and let my teeth lightly

graze his gee-string.

Tim yelped suddenly as I felt his hot hard glans

throb in my mouth, and I felt the pulsing of his shaft

with my encircling fingers as the first stream poured

from his tip to coat my tongue and palate. The

characteristic chlorine odor flooded my nostrils and

his fluid poured into the back of my throat, and I

swallowed hard as his prick throbbed again to deliver

another load into my waiting mouth. He was thrusting

his hot hard penis into the back of my mouth.

My lips were wrapped around his swollen corona, and I

twisted my head to unleash his third spasm that

flooded my mouth with his sperm. Another load blasted

from his slit and I struggled to swallow it. The next

load was weaker, and the next was just a dribble,

although I felt his glans throb each time.

Now Tim was still, exhausted from the biological

storm that had gripped his body. I shifted on the bed

so that my head was next to his, and I hugged him to

me.

"That was really nice," he murmured dreamily. "I

needed relief, and so did you." We lay silently for a

few minutes, and then sat up.

"That wasn't safe, what we did, but I don't care," I

said.

"I'd thought about putting your cock in my mouth, and

I know it isn't safe, but I figured we already trust

each other so much it doesn't matter." Tim smiled as

he said this.

"I guess we do trust each other a lot, Tim. We've got

nothing to hide from each other, and now we literally

trust each other with our lives." I pulled him to me

and kissed his neck. He kissed mine and then hugged me

to him.

"Did you get together with Barry?" I asked. He'd

mentioned Barry to me last time we'd met.

"Oh, yes, I met him. He's Bi, just like we are, and

his main interest is foreskins and foreskin

restoration. I told him about you, and he showed me

how to tape the skin to stretch it enough to cover the

head. He said if I keep at it, I should have enough

skin to do that in a couple of years."

"I noticed your skin seemed to be looser than last

time, Tim. Have you been taping?"

"I have, but I took it off before I got here. I

wanted to see if you'd notice anything."

"Well, I did. You've made progress. I'm sure of that.

Now are you going to keep seeing Barry?"

"No, I'm not. As I'd said, he's Bi and so am I.

Anyway, we agreed to keep in touch, but there's

nothing romantic there. He found a girlfriend and you

know I've been seeing Susan. I really prefer a woman

for company. Women are softer, more nurturing. You

know that."

"I'm glad you found Susan. Maybe she'll be ex

actly what you need. I wish you the best, you know." I

leaned forward and kissed him on the lips, and he

returned the kiss tenderly.

"Did you bring the electro stuff?" he asked.

"Yeah, it's in the corner, that brown box on top of

my suitcase."

"Your cock's still dripping," he said, and he leaned

over to inspect it. He'd drawn my foreskin forward

after finishing with me, but now I saw that there was

a thick drop in the pucker. Tim licked it off, and

slid the hood back to reveal my front dome, still very

wet. His tongue flicked out and I felt it wipe across

and around my slit to get the residue. "There, it's

all taken care of," he said as he pulled my foreskin

back into place over the head.

"I've been doing the Kegel exercises you told me

about in one of your e-mails," I said.

"That's really good. Those exercises strengthen your

pelvic muscles and you can make your cock bob with

erection. You know how I enjoy seeing your big-tipped

cock swing from side to side when you walk. Now you'll

be able to make it go up and down too." He grasped the

end of my foreskin and began pulling gently, tugging

it away from my body. I felt my prick responding to

the gentle stimulation, and reached for his.

"It's pretty soon after we came," I suggested.

"We don't have to come again, or even get hard," he

replied. "We can just play with each other's cocks,

while we talk."

"I know what you mean. You never get tired of

inspecting my prick," I said as I felt Tim's strong

fingers grasp my prick around the base as he began

pushing my foreskin back with two fingers of the other

hand. The friction against my glans fueled my fire and

I felt myself getting harder.

"Not just your skin, your helmet. Your helmet's very

attractive." Meanwhile, I was gently squeezing his

helmet from the sides, knowing that this would make

his cock-root throb.

"Let me pull your skin forward, Tim. I want to see

how much slack you've developed with that taping."

Tim's prick was almost hard now, the helmet flushed

with blood, and I began pulling his shaft-skin up over

his corona. "It goes farther up the head than before,"

I commented. "About half and inch more, I think."

"I've been taping every day, almost 24 hours a day.

Barry told me that keeping the skin stretched is more

important than putting a lot of tension on it."

"Barry's right," I said. "Several friends of mine

told me that that's the way it works."

"You've been stretching your skin too, haven't you? I

know you had plastic surgery to replace your skin, but

you always wanted more length."

"Yeah, and one reason was that that damned plastic

surgeon wasn't too good. Apart from the complications,

the new foreskin was uneven, a lot longer on top than

on the bottom," I said.

"It's still longer along the top, but it's not too

bad." My prick was now fully swollen, with Tim's

caressing fingers gently twisting my foreskin and

stretching its nerve endings.

"You should have seen it 22 years ago, a year after

the surgery. By the time it was fully healed, scar

tissue had contracted and really distorted my hood."

"Well, I'm glad you found a way to solve the problem,

Jack. Anything you can do to make your cock look

better is worth it."

"At least we've both got straight shafts and nice

helmets," I said. Tim's prick was rock-hard, eager for

more stimulation.

"Yeah, I really love those helmets," Tim said as his

eyes bored into mine. "I always enjoyed running my

fingers over your helmet and now I've run my lips and

tongue over it too."

"I remember you seemed a little surprised when the

home-made electrode I'd sent you last year fitted

perfectly over your helmet."

"Oh, I really was surprised. You know how cock-heads

are so different in size and shape on different guys.

Ours seem to be twins, exactly the same size and

shape."

"I measured mine a few years ago," I said. "It's 1

7/8" long and exactly the same wide. I guess yours is

the same." Tim's fingers eased my foreskin back, until

my hood snapped down into the deep groove behind my

rim.

"It looks the same to me," he said. "Anyway, I'd like

to try those electrodes and the unit you brought with

you. The one you gave me is okay, but from what you

said, yours is a really super unit."

"It is super, and I know you'll enjoy using it," I

replied.

"First, though, since I've got your cock hard again,

I want you to stand up in front of me and do your

Kegel exercises. I want to watch that big helmet bob

up and down." I got up from the bed and stood next to

it, while he assumed a seated position on its edge. My

helmet was inches in front of his avidly staring eyes,

and I began to tighten my crotch muscles to make my

staff go up and down.

"That's nice, Jack," he said. "I can see each time

you tighten up, the head goes up about two inches.

That looks really nice, that bare head and the way you

make it move. Your helmet looks sculptured." Tim's

prick was pointing up at me at a 45-degree angle, the

way he was seated.

"I'd like to see how you can move yours, Tim." I

reached down for his hand and pulled him to his feet,

so that our tips were touching. I tightened my crotch

muscles and my glans pulled up away from his, and then

snapped down again when I relaxed.

"That feels so good," he said, "feeling your smooth

glans rubbing against mine." As he spoke, he must have

tightened his crotch muscles, because his prick

snapped up and then came down again, his hard, swollen

glans sliding over mine on the down-stroke. Now I

tensed my Kegel muscles, and my prick rose higher, and

I eased my hips forward slightly so that my engorged

helmet came down on top of his when I relaxed.

"This is getting us really excited," I said.

"Touching tip to tip is something I've never done with

a guy before."

"This is my first time, too," he said. "I can see how

it's turning you on, because your helmet's gettin'

darker." Now he made his prick spring up, and his

glans struck mine on the return stroke.

"I can tell you're becoming excited too, Tim. "Your

head's not gettin' darker but your balls are rising.

Your helmet also looks sculptured. It's very

beautiful. That's why I enjoyed wrapping my lips

around it before." Now I snapped my prick up and then

down onto his engorged glans. At this point he

grasped my shaft.

"What I'd really like, Jack, is to feel your skin

covering my helmet. I know you've been stretching it,

and maybe you've got enough overhang for me." His

thumb and forefinger closed behind the thick ring of

my foreskin, still lodged behind my glans, and I felt

him exert traction to bring it forward.

"Go ahead, pull it forward," I told him. "See how far

it can go on your glans." He continued to pull my

foreskin towards him, sliding it down along my glans

until it touched the rounded dome of his, which he was

pressing against the nose of mine.

"Okay, here goes," he said as he pulled harder, and

we watched my thick fleshy sleeve begin its climb up

the slope of his helmet.

"Lat me do it," I said. "I'll stretch it out and

maybe we can get it over your tip." He released my

foreskin and I grasped it at the forward edge on each

side with thumbs and index fingers, stretching it away

from his glans as well as toward him. I felt him press

his prick against mine, compressing our front domes

and their nerve endings, while I stretched my foreskin

over the rest of his helmet.

"That's as far as it goes," I explained. "I can cover

your head but I don't have enough overhang to really

stroke it with my foreskin."

"That's okay," he whispered. "I just wanted to feel

my helmet wrapped in your skin. It feels so intimate,

being inside your skin." He leaned forward over our

joined pricks and kissed me, a light but lingering dry

kiss on the lips. I kept my fingers around our docked

pricks, maintaining the contact that he enjoyed so

much.

"I love it too," I said. "I love the intimacy of

holding your beautiful helmet inside my foreskin. It

feels so natural."

"It feels so hot," he replied. "Being tip to tip with

you is a terrific turn-on, even more than stroking

your skin and making you come." I felt a slippery gush

pour from the lips of his slit, which were touching my

orifice, and a moment later his helmet slid deeper

into my foreskin, overriding mine.

"You're really hot, the way you're leaking lube and

sliding into my hood."

"Think we can come this way?" he asked.

"No, there's just no more room. My foreskin's so

tightly stretched right now you might tear it if you

thrust at all."

"Well, can we stay like this for a few minutes? It's

so intimate being like this with you, my helmet

against yours."

"Yeah, we can, but let's lie down for this," I

answered, and we slowly and carefully eased ourselves

onto the bed, maintaining the erotic and intimate

contact. We lay face to face, our hot hard pricks

joined at their ends, savoring the warmth of each

other's helmet, pressed together and encapsulated by

my distended foreskin. Tim kissed me on my lips again,

and I moved my head slightly to plant a kiss on his

muscular neck. After many minutes, our excitement

dissipated, and our pricks began to soften.

"Well, if we can't come together like this, can we

try the electro?" he asked. We separated, I got up,

and brought the box to the bed. Digging inside it, I

removed the cup electrode I'd made out of conductive

epoxy to fit my glans exactly. Removing a tube of

conductive jelly, I squirted a large, viscous drop on

the dome of Tim's now exposed glans.

"This is for conductivity. You've used it yourself."

Now I placed the cup attachment carefully over Tim's

helmet, until it covered the entire from dome down to

halfway along the glans. I removed a condom from its

foil envelope and began unrolling it down Tim's hard

shaft. "See that stud sticking out from the top of the

cup?" I asked. "I'll push it through the rubber and

connect the lead to it with an alligator clip."

"This is fascinating, Jack. Are you gonna wire me up

all the way? I've only used one channel of the unit

you gave me." As I finished rolling the condom to the

base of Tim's penis, I pulled a blue conductive band

from the box. As I tightened it around the base of his

prick, right below the rubber ring of the condom, I

explained:

"I'll put some conductive jelly on this too, and

attached the other lead to the glans cup with an

alligator clip. This is the "A" channel. The blue band

will be the common lead for both the "A" and "B"

channels." I pushed the stud through the thin latex

and attached the alligator clip to it, and pushed the

"banana" lead into the receptacle of the wire coming

from the blue band.

"Here, Tim, take this adhesive pad and attach the "B"

wire to it, and then place it by your anus." Tim

followed my directions and then lay back on the bed as

I plugged the wires into the electro unit.

"Now this black button is the on/off switch. I'll

push it now."

"I don't feel anything," he said.

"You won't just yet. The power knobs are at zero. I

want you to turn them up until you can feel something.

Start by turning them to about 30 percent. You can see

the readout in this LED window right here," I said,

pointing to the display window. Tim slowly turned each

power knob up until the display read 31 percent for

each channel.

"I feel something," he said. "It's very faint, and

it's kinda tingly."

"Yes, this first program is called "Waves," and it

feels like fingers are squeezing your prick. Now turn

it up a couple of points on each channel." Tim

carefully moved each knob incrementally, easing the

power level up, until each was at 42.

"Oh, Jack, I can really feel that. It's like fingers

are all over my cock, sliding my shaft-skin over the

head, and then inside me too. It really feels like

waves, running all over my shaft."

Okay, now turn the power up a little more, say to 45,

and see what happens." Tim twisted both knobs

slightly, until Channel "A" read 45 and Channel "B"

read 46.

"How far can I turn it up?" he asked.

"The power level goes up to 100, but you'll find it

uncomfortable long before you reach that. You don't

want to get into pain. You have to experiment to see

what program and power level works for you. Now that

knob to the left of the power knobs is the

multi-adjustment knob. It varies the rhythm and with

some programs, the frequency of the pulses. You turn

that until you find what gets you aroused without

being uncomfortable."

"Right now it feels wonderful, but I don't know if I

can get to orgasm with this."

"Just increase the power a bit, maybe one or two

points, and see what that does." Tim twisted the knobs

and brought the power to 48 on each channel. He sighed

deeply.

"That feels even better. It's really reaching deep

inside me."

"I can tell it is, Tim. I can see your head's getting

darker inside that condom, and the rim's really

standing out. Your balls are tighter, too."

"What's gonna happen when I come?" he asked. "The

cream's gonna push the cup off my helmet."

"Don't worry about that. Your sperm is very

conductive, and the current will still flow from the

cup into your helmet."

"This is really nice," he said. "Should I go higher?"

"Do what you want, as long as it's comfortable for

you. Remember, only a small amount at a time, or

you'll get a bad surprise. You really have to feel

your way along at the higher power levels."

"What's the most you did on Waves, Jack?"

"Oh, about 60 or 70. I was able to come once, but I

had the multi-adjust knob all the way clockwise, for a

fast rhythm. Want to try that first and see how it

feels?" Tim nodded and then twisted to knob slowly, to

see what a faster rhythm would do for him.

"This is making my Kegel muscles contract," he

observed.

"I can see your prick twitching," I said. "The pulses

will make your muscles contract when you hit the right

level and rhythm for you."

"I'll turn the power up a little more. Do I have to

do it the same on each channel?"

"No, just what's comfortable for you," I coached him.

"I usually find that using a higher current in my

penis gives me the best sensations." As I spoke Tim

eased the power level to his penis to 55, in slow

stages, and on the "B" channel to 52.

"This is about all I think I can take. I need to

come, but I can't get there with this." He looked at

me for guidance as he spoke. I withdrew a small

battery-powered vibrator from the box. It was a

six-inch cylinder and half an inch thick. Twisting the

base to turn it on, I pressed the buzzing end against

his frenulum, confident that the sensations would

reach his tender flesh through the thin latex.

"Now I can help you, Tim. You just relax and enjoy

the waves going through you, and I'll work on your hot

spot with this vibrator. I'll get you over the top

this way."

"Oooohhh," he moaned as the sensations filled his

helmet, and I saw his body tense as his excitement

rose abruptly.

"That's it, Tim, just try to relax and let me bring

you over the edge. His hand gripped my free hand,

squeezing tightly, communicating his tension to me.

"My cock's gonna explode," he grunted, "it's just so

hard, so swollen...."

"You're gonna come hard, Tim. Just try to relax and

let the orgasm come to you." His hips lifted off the

bed as he tried to thrust his helmet deeper into the

electric cup that covered the front of it. Now Tim's

prick jerked hard.

"OH! OH! OH! HUNH! HUNH! HUNHHHHHH!" he cried out as

the first hot spasm hit him. I saw the front of the

condom distend as creamy liquid flowed from between

the cup and his glans. His lips were drawn back in an

orgastic rictus, and his head moved from side to side

from the effect of the overpowering sensations.

"Just stay with me, Tim," I said, not at all sure he

heard me, as I pressed the vibrator harder against the

hot spot under his helmet. His hips bucked again, and

the condom distended further as he unloaded again. His

loud cries filled the room, and I knew that his mind

was on "HOLD," overpowered by his ecstasy.

Tim cried out loudly again, and his prick throbbed

with another release. His eyes were closed and the

cords in his neck taut with effort. His jaw dropped as

he let out another helpless cry of blissful agony, and

I saw a definite gap between the front dome of his

straining helmet and the cup shaped to fit it. I

turned down the power on both channels and removed the

vibrator, letting his orgasm fade as he drained

himself into the condom.

Tim's prick twitched a few more times in counterpoint

to his heavy breathing, until I saw his body relax as

the orgasm died. I turned off the electro power box

and lay down beside him, hugging him to enhance his

afterglow. He opened his eyes and turned his head

toward me, eyes boring into mind in wordless

gratitude. I kissed his lips, then his chin, and

finally his neck.

"That was mind-boggling," he said.

"I'm glad you enjoyed it," I replied. "It was great

for me, too, although I didn't come. I got a real

thrill out of making you come, feeling your prick

jerk, watching your sperm fill that rubber. I knew

what you were feeling, and I was glad to be able to do

it for you."

"That was magnificent, Jack." Tim kissed me on the

lips again, and this time I felt his tongue probing

passionately into my mouth. I reciprocated, and our

tongues twirled around each other, swept up in a wave

of excitement. When we finally broke, I was the first

to speak:

"It's getting late. Want to go out to eat? I'm

getting hungry."

"What about you, Jack? Do you want to do some electro

on your cock?"

"No, I don't think I can have another orgasm tonight.

Remember, I'm 23 years older than you."

"Okay, then, let's get up and shower. I'm really hot

and sweaty after this," he said. Tim rose and I

followed him into the bathroom, where we got under the

shower, enjoying the spray of warm water on our

bodies. I began to soap his back.

"I don't have to have as many orgasms as you, Tim.

I'm perfectly satisfied with what I had, and I really

enjoyed watching you shoot your loads. You know that

always gives me a thrill."

"I know it does. I'm glad you get a charge out of

watching me shoot, just like I get a charge out of

handling your skin. By the way, I've gotta pee. How

about you? I can hold your skin shut like the last

time." His words reminded me that my bladder was

indded full, and the hot water running down my penis

reinforced that thought.

"Okay, I do have to go, and yes, you go right ahead

and hold my foreskin shut while I drain myself." I

felt his strong fingers grasp the end of my foreskin

nipple and pinch it as I relaxed my sphincter.

"Just like you enjoy watching me shoot, I get a

thrill out of watching your hood swell when I pinch

the end. That gives me such a charge, really. You

can't imagine." He relaxed his hold on my hood and we

watched the thick yellow gush pour out and blend with

his stream, flowing between us and running down the

drain. Tim pinched and released my foreskin several

times, making it balloon out and then collapse as he

let it drain, until I was empty.

We finished washing each other, Tim paying particular

attention to retracting my foreskin and rinsing

underneath, and then we dried each other and got

dressed. We'd decided to eat at a steak house in the

next town, and as I drove, he reminisced:

"Remember that time you phoned me on a Saturday night

and we got so hot talking to each other that we jerked

off? You really had me going when you described how

you'd skinned your cock back and the head looked

exactly like mine?"

"Yes, I remember it well," I replied. "That was a

real turn-on for both of us."

"I was looking at my cock while you were talking and

stroking it with Albolene, and when you told me that

you had it skinned back and were massaging the helmet

I imagined that I was looking at your cock right there

in front of me, and that while I was stroking my cock

I was really stroking yours. That's what set me off,

and why I shot so fast."

"You're right, Tim. It was a lot like that for me. I

told you how my helmet looked so shiny and sculptured,

and I realized I was also describing yours. I thought

about my fingers working on the contours of your

helmet, because yours is so much like mine."

"I was really into it with you then, even though we

were a thousand miles apart. You remember how when I

came, I was yelling your name?"

"Oh, yes, Tim. I was surprised at that. You'd told me

you were close, but I expected you to moan or grunt

when you came. Instead, I heard you shouting my name."

"That's because I was thinking about your cock. In my

mind, the cock I was stroking was yours. Remember how

I told you I was twisting my fingers around the rim?"

"That's right. I remember. You were thinking that you

were making my helmet tingle, and that you were making

me shoot."

"Oh, that's it exactly, Jack. You fired my fantasy. I

was fantasizing that I had a cock exactly like yours,

that I had the cock-skin skinned back tight, and was

working on the big helmet." I felt my prick starting

to swell as Tim described his thoughts and sensations

to me, and I sighed deeply.

"We'd better stop talking about this," I said. "It

wouldn't do for me to walk into the steak house with a

hard-on showing."

"Me too. My cock's getting hard thinking about it."

By the time we'd arrived, our excitement had subsided,

and we didn't embarrass ourselves. We secured a corner

table, away from the other diners, and ordered steaks

with mushroom sauce.

"I don't know what we'll do when we get back," I said

over the salad. "We might be ready to go to sleep."

"I know I will," he said. "I always get sleepy when I

have a full stomach. Anyway, we've got tomorrow and

Sunday. That should be enough."

"I know it will," I said. "Anyway, let's concentrate

on enjoying the steaks. They serve Mid-Western beef

here, much better than the local kind." We finished

the meal with few words, exchanging lingering glances,

and then we drove back to the resort.

Next morning I awoke with a full bladder, and I could

tell that Tim's was full as well, because he was

sporting a magnificent erection, with the helmet fully

swollen. I clasped it, causing him to stir, and

moments later he opened his eyes and looked at me

sleepily.

"Hi," he said. "I like waking up like this, feeling

your hand on my cock." He reached for my penis, gently

sliding the foreskin back and forth over my bloated

glans. My prick responded immediately, going from

partial to full erection within seconds.

"We both have to pee," I suggested.

"I wish so much you could dock me. We could come

inside your skin, and then pee inside it to flush it

out."

"I know how much you enjoyed going tip to tip with me

yesterday, and this gave me an idea."

"What?" he asked eagerly.

"Let's go tip to tip again, but this time connected

to the electro box."

"You mean with the current flowing between our

cocks?" As he spoke, Tim reached for a towel we'd

placed on the bedside table the night before and

spread it between us.

"Yes, exactly. If we do it right now, we can have the

pressure of full bladders to make it hotter for us."

We both knew that full bladders always enhanced the

sensations for us.

"I think that'll make me come very fast," he said.

"It's gonna be exciting three ways, having to pee,

going tip to tip with your helmet, and then the

electro too." I reached for the box with the unit and

the electrodes. Attaching a conductive pad to one of

the wires, I handed it to him.

"Here, put this by your anus, just like you did

yesterday." As he placed the electrode between his

buttocks, I put the blue band around the base of his

prick.

"How are you gonna set it up for you?" he asked.

"The blue band around your shaft is the common lead.

The one by your anus is the "B" channel. Now I'm gonna

put this blue band around the base of my shaft for the

"A" channel." I slid the blue band down my shaft,

tightened it, and wet it with conductive jelly. Next,

I wet his blue band for better conductivity, and

connected the wires.

"Now ease up to me and press the front of your helmet

against mine," I continued. "I'll drip a couple of

drops of jelly between them to make good contact." I

felt and saw Tim press the bulging front dome of his

helmet against mine, the contact made slippery by the

viscous but smooth jelly.

"That feels so good," he said. "Even without the

juice, it's nice to press my tip against yours."

"Okay, now I'm gonna turn it on to Waves for a

minute. Since I can feel the current too, I'll take

care of the power levels." I worked the knobs and felt

the pleasant electric tingles coursing the length of

my penis, from base to glans, and I saw by his eyes

that Tim was feeling it too.

"Now I'm gonna switch to Toggle," I said after a

minute. "This is gonna give you a hot pulse at just

the right frequency from the base of your prick

through your prostate for a few seconds, and then the

pulse is gonna run from my prick to the base of yours,

through the heads." I punched the button to switch to

Toggle, and turned the power levels up to 45.

"That feels super," he said. Each time it pulses, my

muscles tighten up as if I'm doing the Kegel

exercises."

"I can see what it's doing to you," I said. "Your

balls are already getting tighter."

"Yeah, and our helmets are hard and shiny." I turned

the power levels up to 50.

"Just make sure to keep our tips pressed together so

we don't break contact," I coached him. I felt his

prick jerk against mine with each pulse, and when the

current flowed through mine to the base of his, my

crotch muscles tightened involuntarily in hard

contractions.

"I know this is gonna make me come," he whispered.

"This is so intense."

"Toggle always makes me come," I said. "It makes my

Kegel muscles tighten hard, and that always pushes me

over the edge."

"I'm gettin' there," he whispered. "Close, close." I

felt the tension in his body, although we were

connected only by our pricks. The cords in his neck

stood out and his legs began twitching. I turned up

the power on the "A" channel, as the longer current

path meant I needed more voltage, and was rewarded by

powerful contractions in my crotch.

"Both our tips are hard and shiny," I commented

through clenched teeth, not sure that he heard me

because he was so far into it. I felt his prick jerk

hard, pressing against the front of my glans, and then

he cried out:

"Jack! Jack!" as a thick and powerful gush of hot

lava erupted from his slit, which was aligned with my

orifice. I felt the surge of fluid force its way

through the lips of my teardrop and down my tube,

triggering my orgasm just as a heavy pulse of tingling

voltage coursed through my prick.

My eyes snapped shut as my body responded, and the

sharp contractions of my crotch muscles forced a heavy

gush of hot fluid into my tube and up my prick, where

it poured out between our straining helmets. I was

grunting with effort and passion, totally absorbed in

the overpowering sensations, as Tim cried out again,

splashing another torrent of sperm between us. The

alternating pulses fueled our fires, as did the

intimate contact of our helmets, and we both moaned

helplessly as the fury of our orgasms devastated our

consciousness.

I don't know how many times I ejaculated, caught up

in the storm of our mutual passion, but I became aware

that my throbs were weakening, and I turned off the

box with one hand, using the other to keep our pricks

in intimate contact. Thick white cream had dripped

from our engorged helmets to form a puddle on the

towel, and I folded it up and carefully wiped our

pricks with it. We lay very still, exhausted by our

efforts, our tingling tips gradually softening as the

blood flowed out of them.

"Jack, that was hotter than last night," he said as

he opened his eyes. I hadn't noticed his eyes closing

because I'd been so enraptured by my own excitement.

"It was hotter for me, too," I replied. "You know you

shot your first load right down my tube?"

"No," he said. "I really did?"

"Yeah. Our pricks were pressed right against each

other, and our holes must have been in perfect

alignment for that second, but I felt your hot load

shooting right into me. I don't know how far down my

prick it went, but I lost it right then. I just went

into spasm down there."

"This ever happen to you before?"

"No, it never did," I answered. "It was a hot

experience. Feeling your juice bubbling down my prick

just sent me into orbit."

"Maybe it worked because your slit opens up when your

helmet swells. Otherwise my cream might have just run

out from between our heads."

"I'm sure that had something to do with it. Also, you

really shoot hard when you come. It felt like I was

getting filled by a fire hose."

"Well, I shot so hard because of the electro, and

because I was tip to tip with your cock. All that got

me really excited, more than ever before," he said.

"Well, let's disconnect and go clean up," I

suggested. We removed the electrodes and wires, and

soon were again under the shower.

"This is a nice part of being together," Tim said.

"It's not just the sex, it's the intimacy. Taking

showers together, soaping each other, drying each

other, all that means a lot to me."

"It means a lot to me, too," I said as I pulled him

to me for a prolonged kiss. "I like to feel your warm

body against mine, in bed and in the shower," I

continued when we broke.

"Now that I'm soft, I've gotta pee real bad," Tim

said, and I saw the yellow stream pouring from the

gaping lips of his shrunken helmet. This stimulated

me, and mine began to flow, sluicing through the long

hood that had once more covered my glans. Tim pinched

my foreskin a couple of times, apparently never tiring

of watching my hood distend with the pressure.

As we were drying ourselves, Tim remarked:

"I noticed that your cock hangs a little bit to the

left. Is that because you keep it on the left side of

your boxers?"

"That might be it," I answered. "I've always kept it

hanging down on the left side, and that could have

given it a set in that direction."

"Mine does too, just a little, not as much as yours.

I dress to the left too, just like you do."

"Both of ours point straight ahead when they're hard,

though," I said.

"I'm glad we both have straight shafts, Jack. I

noticed some guys have curved cocks, to one side or

the other, and even up or down."

"I've seen that too," I remarked. "I'm glad ours are

straight. I think it's more attractive that way."

"Oh, sure, Jack. Your cock is very attractive, hard

or soft."

"So is yours," I said as we got dressed and prepared

to go for breakfast. We ate at a roadside diner,

hoping that the food would be good, although the diner

was not part of a chain. We ate a conventional fare of

bacon, eggs, and hash browns.

"What do you think we should do when we get back?"

Tim asked between bites.

"I think we ought to take our time getting back," I

replied. "Are you ready for another orgasm right now?"

"When I'm with you, I'm always ready. You must have

noticed that."

"Yeah, and you also told me you often have four

orgasms a day. There was only one day when I had four

orgasms, and that was when I was 16. You have a higher

sex drive than I do, and you're also 23 years

younger."

"Oh, you're not bad for an old guy," Tim said with a

big grin.

"Thanks," I replied.

After we'd finished we took a tour of the town,

stopping at a local mining museum, looking at the

displays of ancient mining equipment that used to be

the major force in the town's economy. We were alone

in the museum, apart from the guide, who took our

money and handed us tickets, but remained at her desk

the whole time we were there. As we drove back to the

motel, Tim suggested a plan for the afternoon:

"What about doing Princeton with the electro? Can we

hook up and do that?"

"I'm not sure how we'd set the current path," I said.

"The rubber is an insulator, and that could stop us

cold."

"Maybe we could do it without a rubber. Put an

electrode on your cock, and one at the base of mine."

"Okay, let's give it a try when we get there. If we

can do it, you just might have a super orgasm again."

"I think I'll have a super orgasm with you any way we

do it," he replied. Once inside our room, we again

stripped down, and I noticed that we were getting hard

even while we were still removing our clothes.

Wordlessly, we stood facing each other, our pricks

touching.

"That feels nice, my helmet rubbing against your

cock-skin," he said. The gentle friction brought our

pricks to full attention, and soon we were swaying

from side to side, swiping the ends of our pricks

against each other. Now Tim reached for mine, gently

easing the foreskin back to bare my glans.

"I like to feel your big smooth helmet against mine,"

he said. "The skin's nice, but feeling the helmet's

out of this world." He moved his hips slightly,

sliding his heavy-ended prick across the end of mine,

caressing my front dome with his.

"Now let's get my ridge rubbing up and down your

frenulum," I said as I guided my helmet under his,

until my flaring corona caressed his gee-string.

"Oooooh, that's good, so good," he whispered. "You're

really getting me excited now."

"Let's get onto the bed and see how we can manage

Princeton," I suggested, going into the bathroom for

another towel, and within seconds we were lying facing

each other. "I brought something that might do the

trick for us, I said as I reached into the box I'd

brought onto the bed with me.

"This is Astroglide gel," I explained. "It's also

conductive, and a lot thicker than the liquid we've

used before. That should make it smoother for you

between my thighs, so you don't get a hair burn. The

friction won't be as good, but with the electro, you

should be able to cream." I spread a thick film over

Tim's penis as I spoke, and worked some in between my

thighs.

"Now take this electrode and put it between your

cheeks like before," I said. "I'll wrap the blue band

around the base of your prick."

"Let me put the other band on yours, Jack. You know

how I love to touch your cock." We slipped the blue

bands down each other's pricks, and tightened them

around the base. Tim squirted a drop of conductive

jelly onto my blue band, and I connected the wires.

"Okay, Tim, now the "A" and "B": channels are just

like before. You can reach over me and stroke my

foreskin all you want because the band's on the base

of my prick." Tim slipped into place and I felt his

prick between my thighs as he began thrusting slowly.

"I guess the towel's gonna catch my cream and yours,

the way we've got it under us." I punched the button

on the electro box, and turned up the power to 35. I

felt the tingling of the Waves program surging through

my lower body.

"That feels really nice, Jack. The current's going

right through my cock and prostate. How's it feel for

you?"

"I think I'll turn up the power a little more on the

"A" channel, since there's a long current path. How's

this?" I asked as I turned the power up to 45.

"Oh, great, oh, delicious," Tim said, and I felt his

thrusting become more urgent. His strong fingers

closed around the end of my prick, stroking the

foreskin in long slow strokes along my glans. The

gentle friction and pressure fueled my fire, and I

felt more blood rushing into my already engorged

penis.

"I can feel you down there," I said. "I can feel

every stroke, while you're pumping your prick."

"I can feel your helmet through the skin," he said.

"I can feel it swelling even more. That ridge is

really standing out the way it's swollen."

"Your helmet's getting bigger too," I replied. Even

between my thighs, I could feel his corona becoming

more clearly defined.

"Can you switch to Toggle, the way you did

yesterday?" he asked. "I think I'll come this way, but

the Toggle action makes it really intense."

"Let's stay with Waves for another minute," I said.

"If I switched to Toggle now, it would be over too

soon, and I know how you like to make it last."

"Oh, you're right, Jack. I'm really enjoying this

right now. I love it how my cock's sliding between

your legs, and the current's stroking it as well." We

continued this way, with Tim's thrusts becoming more

forceful, and I felt his fingers tightening around my

foreskin as his excitement mounted.

"How are you doing now," I asked. "It feels like

youre getting close."

"I am getting closer, Jack. Can you switch to Toggle

now? I want to feel those hot pulses that make my

Kegel muscles tighten." I punched the button to change

to Toggle and increased the power to 65 on the "A"

channel and 60 on the "B" channel.

"How's that?" I asked. "Enough for you?"

"Oh, you can give me more," he moaned. "I want to

really feel it." I turned the power to 75 and 70.

Tim's prick seemed to surge between my thighs, and the

long pulses of hot current made our Kegel muscles

tighten in powerful spasms that promised to bring

relief within seconds.

Tim was silent now, except for his ragged breathing,

punctuated by deep groans, and I knew he was rapidly

approaching release because both his thrusts and his

strokes on my foreskin had increased. I was moaning

too, carried away by the intensity of the sensations.

My helmet was swollen to its maximum, and it ached for

the relief of orgasm.

Tim's hips slammed against me, and I felt his body

straining against mine as he raced towards orgasm. His

fingers had tightened even more on my prick, and the

combination of the friction and the hot pulses was

driving me forward. The pulses made it impossible for

me to relax, and my crotch muscles tightened

rhythmically in delicious spasms, numbing my

consciousness.

"HHHHAHHHHH! Jack!" Tim howled as I felt his penis

throb hard between my thighs. My eyes closed, and a

moment later my superheated, engorged glans exploded,

and we were both in the throes of a hot and mindless

orgasm. The sensations punched through me, making me

yelp uncontrollably, as our bodies strained against

each other. I felt Tim's hot liquid pouring out

between my thighs, coating my hairs and my scrotum

with thick, viscous fluid. Tim continued to pump

frenziedly, while the sperm boiled up out of my prick,

some of it coating my helmet and the inside of my

foreskin. Each time the electronic box toggled to send

the pulse through my prick, my Kegel muscles tightened

involuntarily. Now he peeled my foreskin back, where

it caught behind my rim, and I felt the naked flesh of

his fingers against my tender glans. The sharpness of

the sensations made me cry out helplessly as my crotch

muscles went into another spasm and expelled a hot

torrent up my prick. The surge distended the lips of

my orifice, as I knew his ejaculations were distending

his, and we grunted and moaned as the hot sensations

poured through us.

The powerful spasms drained me, and it was almost

painful to feel my Kegel muscles straining under the

impetus of the friction of Tim's fingers on my helmet

and the electric pulses that drove my orgasm from

inside me. I was sobbing as I punched the OFF button

on the unit, and we shuddered together as our final

loads of sperm poured from our pricks.

We lay still, unable to speak, stunned into silence

by the fury of our orgasms. Our pricks were still

dribbling, punctuated by twitches deep inside us, as

we sank into the delicious bliss of the afterglow. We

were almost comatose for minutes, enjoying the

physical relief and the intimacy, until Tim gathered

enough strength to speak:

"Ohhhh, Jack, that was like nothing I've ever felt

before." I suddenly remembered that I'd been so

enraptured by my sensations, I'd forgotten to rub his

frenulum during his orgasm.

"I forgot to put my finger down there to press

against your gee-string while I was coming."

"I guess you didn't. I didn't even notice because I

was just shooting my load so hard. Between handling

your uncut cock and the electro, I was in seventh

heaven."

"Oh, then you know how I was caught up in it," I

said.

"I know, Tim. It was super hot for me, too." As I

spoke, I felt Tim's strong fingers pulling my foreskin

forward to cover my glans.

"I've got to pull you skin up to protect the precious

head," he commented.

"Thanks, Tim. Feel like getting up now?"

"No, let's just lay here for a few minutes, Jack. I

feel so close to you." I felt him kiss the back of my

neck in a moment of tenderness. On impulse, I wrestled

free, feeling his penis slip from between my thighs as

I turned to face him. I hugged him to me, in a tangle

of arms, legs, electrodes, and wires. His arms closed

around me. I felt his heartbeat against my chest as I

kissed him on the lips, and I pushed my tongue into

him. We held the clinch for several romantic minutes,

enjoying the warmth of each other's bodies, silently

sharing the closeness.

We relaxed and our clinch loosened. I began removing

the wires and electrodes that had brought us so much

bliss. The towel beneath us was soaked with our sperm.

I gathered it up and used it to wipe our groins.

Slowly we got to our feet and headed for the shower,

silently, as we didn't need to speak. There was

nothing to say. Our silent intimacy said it all.

Again, we had to relieve our straining bladders, and

Tim played with my foreskin as I let my fluid gush

into the drain, pinching and releasing it, fascinated

by the distention of my foreskin each time. Tim pulled

my foreskin back behind the rim to give the head a

thorough rinse, and then replaced it.

We enjoyed the sensation of the hot water coursing

over our bodies, and the feeling of sensual intimacy

that sharing the shower brought us. We stood hugging

wordlessly for a minute, kissing each other on the

neck, cheek, and lips, until we spontaneously decided

to rinse off and get dried.

"You are so sexy, Tim," I said as we dried each

other.

"Same goes for you," he replied. "Being together with

you made this weekend for me. Too bad it has to end so

soon." Tim had to be back at work on Monday, and this

meant he'd have to leave the next day.

"I'm sorry we won't get an entire weekend together

like last time," I said wistfully.

"Yeah, I can't take Monday off the way I did last

time. It's a day's drive home for me, just like it is

for you. I won't leave early, because it doesn't

matter if I get home late at night." As we walked back

to the bed, I said:

"We have so much in common, despite the age

difference."

"We were both circumcised as babies, we were both

only children..." He trailed off.

"We can still enjoy sex a lot," I said. "I got my

foreskin back through plastic surgery, and you're

stretching your shaft-skin to cover your glans. Keep

at it, and you'll have a better foreskin than I do,

for sure."

"You told me that stretching won't leave any scars

the way the surgery left on you."

"That's true. It just takes patience, a lot of it," I

said. As I was speaking I fingered his penis, which

was again swelling.

"This talking about sex is getting my cock hard

again," he said. "Also, feeling you touch me helps a

lot."

"Well, your sex drive is higher than mine," I

replied.

"I guess it is, Jack. Mind if I play with your

foreskin? That excites me a lot."

"Go ahead, but don't be surprised if I don't get hard

right away. Anyway, I want this part to be just for

you. Remember you e-mailed me those pages on genital

massage? They were really interesting, and I'd like to

try those techniques on you now."

"Go ahead, but can you use the Albolene? That's my

favorite lubricant because it doesn't dry out." I let

go of his penis and reached for the jar n the bedside

table.

"Okay, Tim. I've got some of it on my fingers now.

I'll warm it up so it doesn't feel cold when I touch

you." I rubbed the cream between the fingers of my

right hand, feeling it liquefy and become less

viscous.

"Now I'll start by running my fingertip up the

underside of your penis, from the base to the tip." I

began where his shaft melted almost imperceptibly into

his scrotum, probing for the urethral tube, and

pressed in lightly. Now I brought my finger up the

underside right into the vee-groove under his helmet,

pressing in on his gee-string, and then starting at

the bottom again.

"Oh, Jack, that feels good, especially when you hit

my hot spot right on the underside of the helmet."

"Okay, Tim, just concentrate on that feeling, how my

finger feels as slides up the underside of your prick.

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My question:

What's the intention surfing the net?

My answer:

For me, to add colour to my life.

To have some fun.

To make myself happier.

......

If that's the case, I'll try to see things lightly and ...

Be Happy!

--as always reminded by our host BW.

My question:

If I don't speak Malay, do I stop people from using a Malay nickname?

My answer:

I won't (although it might mess up the forum a bit).

I will show respect to different belief, culture and practice.

I believe it stands a better chance for me to catch more fish if the pond water is muddy.

(Well... I have the urge here to quote you the proverb in chinese to make my message clearer. But I won't do it the moment till your PC is updated.)

My question:

What should I do if I come across articles I do not like?

(For example, vulgar language, RA rated material, controversy etc...)

My answer:

I'll simply skip the page, without complaint.

I believe that my energy should spend on something meaningful and constructive to the forum, rather to re-act like a spoilt child telling others what I want and what I don't want.

I have been a quiet reader with BW for quite some time.

I prefer reading BW's earlier articles to the present ones.

I prefer Lungker's article when he was Golfnut.

But...

I won't complain.

Things change along with time.

I just do my bit to hope for a "Renaissance".

Well, I might look like Don Quixotte however...

"Be happy!"

[FattChoy]

ApaIni,

Basically, Universality is definitely a trait that we aim for in this forum.

For example, it's sometimes nice and refreshing to read posting and replies from Japanese people writing in with Japanese accented written English.

It shows that they understand what we're trying to convey and they want to participate in the discussion and offer their points of views.

You've asked:

1) Can we post only in English?

Ideally that would be nice.

However, the only reason why Uncle Li's story ended up here in Mandarin was because the English version fell flat.

I later suggested that we salvage what we can, ie, an "If you can't reach everyone, go for half the crowd" approach.

I understand that it sometimes look very cluttered, like some Japanese p--n website with all the strange rectangular characters coming out.

All I can suggest to you is to install the chinese font, not that it'll make you understand it, it'll just clear up the clutter.

Hey, most of us have the Japanese fonts too, not that we all understand it.

We just want it to load up properly, that's all.

You've raised a suggestion:

2) Why not just provide the link, instead of cut and paste?

A cut and paste is better because it provides a foundation and better continuity for further discussion.

It also encourages spinoff of similar stories from other readers.

Wouldn't you think if it's just a link, the replies would be few or limited to only eliciting a , "Wow, that was hot. TQ" ?

Finally, you've asked the question on content and types of stories/posting.

3) Is this what we want?

Well, one man's meat is another man's poison.

It would seem that Marksman have told you in the face that your posting is just cheap graphical vulgar hardcore Net p--n as opposed to sensous reality-style uncle-next-door erotica that some of us might relate too.

Personally, I felt he is somewhat right, but that's only my opinion.

Perhaps, the context of your story in Uncle Li's thread is a little out.

Why don't you created a new thread under "Fictionous Dirty Net Stories"?

You can then channel your target audiences there and the response and continuity would be better.

The same as in marksman's thread of "Diary in Chinese".

I don't read Chinese, so I steer clear of the Chinese postings.

I don't crucify him for it; heck it's hard enough to get people to participate in whatever form they can.

In a gist, as long as we strive to make as many people out there understand what we're posting, they'll automatically reciprocate a little give and take.

I do notice that you did asked in a very humble way, for some guidelines as well as foot some suggestions.

It shows that there are still some problems to iron out and you want something better.

That, my friend, is better than public apathy anytime.

[HendryTan]

Thanks to guest for the enthusiastic posting.

Thanks to oralb (fellow moderator) for sharing the original post.

Thanks to ApaIni for the very illustrative feedback. I got the point

Thanks to Marksman for the feedback.

Thanks to FattChoy for the sharing your views. Thank a lot.

I'll like to close this thread as it has deviated from the original topic.

I'll open another thread under GuestBook Suggestions/Feedback to continue dicussion on what is the most preferred way for quoting articles. I'll share my own opinions there too.

Cheers